Thursday, 15 December 2011

my confection



I confect that I have a problem with my concentration because when I am doing my homework I get distracted by my PS3 very easily. I got the concentration problem after 7th grade. I don’t know how I got it but I am losing my grade because of my problem. Every day I go home and do my English home work, but while doing my other homework I get distracted by something. I do complete my homework but it takes longer than it usually takes.

            I feel comfortable to doing my homework at 10 PM. Because of that I do all my homework at 10 PM expect English (I do my English earlier because it is my most important class). I even kept my PS3 in the attic one day, thinking that I can do my homework but I still got distracted. I think my problem is that I play too much. On holidays I will study but most of the time I will be playing on my PS3. I want to solve my problem but I don’t know how to. Even in class while listening what the teacher is saying I look away and something will catch my attention and I don’t listen what the teacher is saying.

The three things I get distracted from are PS3, TV, and Computer. Sometimes I never get distracted by these things.  I don’t know why but I want to solve the3 problem

Monday, 12 December 2011

How I Got Idea For Memoir

I like to write memoirs but the problem is that I am not a good writer. One day in class Mrs. Meadows told everyone to write a memoir but I was in complete problems because I didn’t know what to write about. That made me worried in her class. Everyone started to write about thing. Even I started writing about the day when he went to Playa Blanca and how I had fun. Then I stopped red mine from the start to how much I red. I wasn’t impressed with me with me work so I tried to improve it. That when Mrs. Meadows told the whole class that
“Everyone must have ten craft moves in their memoir. I was even confused when she said that because didn’t know what a craft move was. Then I went online and clicked

“What is a is a craft move”

And the reply came. I read the reply and I started working. Write just then I started thinking about me first swimming class with Raj my cousin. Then Mrs. told us that

“Every one copy the craft moves in your writing journal”. I did what she said, I wrote down all the craft moves in my writing journal. There was still 20 minutes left in class. Mrs. Meadows told that

“Guys if you come across any craft move you can tell and we can write it down on the chart”, after she told us that. I started to write about my swimming first swimming class.

    The Catcher In The Rye



    The catcher in the rye a book by the author named JD Salinger. This is a realistic fiction book but the content in the book is what happens in real life. This book was banned as soon as it was realized because it had in appropriate langue in it. The year of the banning is from 1951 to 2001. But it was unbanned form in 2002

    The catcher in the rye is relevant to this time. I can say this because even fourth graders know all the in appropriate langue in the book. And also parents want their kid to know about sex. And all lot of students runaway from school because of some reason.  So the book is relevant to this time.

    The catcher in the rye is a good help to the future. It has school experiences that happen in reality. By reading the book you can get to know how the real world functions which is very helpful in the future.  This book also can be a good guide about how to survive in the real world. Even though it has bad word it is a good book for young readers because it teaches them a lot.

    A lot of people say this book should be banned because this book has inappropriate langue.  At first when the book came out everyone was shock that this book had a lot of in appropriate langue so it was banned from school kids. But it is still on the banned list but it is not banned. But in some countries the book is still banned because it is believed that this book is a bad influence on kid.  So that’s why some people tell that this book is not relevant to this time

    The catcher in the rye is very relevant to this time.  And teaches should make the kids to read it.  It can help the kid get to know about the real world. Help kid understand the book. And this book is fun to read.

    Learning To Swim


    Synopsis of Learning to Swim

    In the book learning to swim by Ann Turner, the author talks about her story when she was molested by her friend, Kevin. The significance of the title is that she connects swimming to life. When she said she was sinking while swimming, it was because she was thinking about Kevin molesting her. The author has realized that if you get hurt by someone, don’t be afraid to tell an elder. This book is organized in a poem format which makes it very appealing. It starts like this:

    Annie and her family go to their summer house for the summer break. After a few days she makes a lot of friends and Kevin is one of them. At first she thought that Kevin was a nice guy but after getting molested she got to know his true colors. Being getting molested was making her feel weird for some days. After noticing Annie’s odd behavior her mom asked, “What book did you read with Kevin in your room?” Then she tells the whole story. Her mom goes to Kevin’s house. Since her visit and until Annie left her summer house, Kevin didn’t even come out of his house. But after returning home she has a dream that Kevin came to kill her but it was actually her dad who had stepped into her room to see what she was doing. From that day she was able to get back to her normal life. By this memoir she got to know about herself that no one can ever force her to do what she didn’t want to do. My thoughts about the book are that it is very enjoyable and interesting. When you read the title it gives another meaning but when you read the book surprisingly it is not what you think. That is a good touch the author made. In this memoir you can actually visualize what she is telling you which shows that the book has good description. One of the lines I liked is: “I was drowning in swimming because I was thinking about Kevin.” I like this line because it is more meaningful than it seems. Ann Turner is connecting life with swimming when she is saying that her life is going down because she is still not able to get over what Kevin did.

    Friday, 28 October 2011

    The Sleepy Hollow

                                           

    The place where I live is a small separated sheltered inlet of Hudson in the drowsy valley of Sleepy Hollow. Once it was reverberated with stories of fantasies and superstitions.
            The people in the area are influenced by the tales of ghosts and evil spirits told by their ancestors.
            The most important fact of the haunted story is the statue of the headless horseman who played tricks on the people of Sleepy Hollow. These activities were interminable.
            My name is Ichabod Crane. I lived in Sleepy Hollow for many days where I used to travel from place to place as a schoolteacher and a music teacher for kids of farmers. Since I brought the local gossip and helped with the chores, my periodical visits were affable to the housewives.
            I am tall, thin,  have a unique personality (according to others), and lacking vanity. I used to tell the stories of which witchcraft, during wintry evening before a crackling wood fire.
            I felt my life is surrounded by phantoms and menacing shadows. Apart from these, I am profoundly impelled by the most bewitching of all witches, a woman, Katrina Van Tassel. Katrina is the only child of existing farmer, stunningly beautiful and famed for lot of expectations.
            I visited her as a music teacher frequently and became attracted by her wealth, her father has rich meadowlands, over flowing barns, farmhouse with old mahogany, pewter and silver. I became greedy and eager to marry her.
            My fearful rival is Brom Van Brun whose nick name was Brom Bones; he was the hero of the Sleeping Hollow. He is always irascible ready to fight or frolic.
            The old ladies of the sleeping hollow never treated him amiss. They never got angry about his tricks. He wanted to capture Katrina and on a Sunday his horse was tied to the fence of Van Tazel where this discouraged the suitors.
            In the name of teacher, I used to go to the Van Tassel’s farm frequently. But all my trials for her love felt difficulties.
    Brom Bones declared a deadly revenge activity at me. Like a sage I avoided physical combat. Even I became a victim of his and his companion’s temperamental activities. They destroyed my school completely and gave a scary opinion to Katrina about me.
     One autumnal afternoon was in a despondent mood. The surrounding was standing still. That was until it disturbed by the entry of the galloping messenger. He gave an invitation for “Quilting frolic” in Van Tassel’s farm.
    I dismissed the school, polished my only suit of rust black and soon rode forth a gallant’s cavalier to the bidding of the lady fair.
    I went quilting frolic of by Gunpowder the bony old plow-horse borrowed from the farmer with whom I settled.
    By evening I reached Van Tassels farm, the farmers surrounding the country gathered there. I was attracted not by the beautiful young ladies there, but by the big dinner table with delicious ham, chicken, doughnuts, crullers and ginger cakes. I made enough justice to my ample appetite. By seeing wealth around I felt that someday I would be the Master of it all.
    Soon the dance began, and dancing with Katrina I felt victory over. But Brom Bones was striked by envy and kept himself reclusive. Later I joined sager folk to tell about ghost, goblins and of the headless horseman.
    It was pitch black when started back home, all the tails of the ghosts was haunting my mind and situation was tremulous and the night became darker and darker when I reached the church yard, the scene of many fearful blood-curdling stories.
    Suddenly I heard a clatter of hoofs. Something huge, shapeless loomed about the crouching shadows. I got terrified and dashed ahead some unknown followed me closely.
    I could see the headless horseman through a rafting cloud and his head rested on the pommel of saddle.  I turned my head to look, what an abhorring sight it was! He was charging at me with full strength. For a minute I thought I should entreat him to spare me but it happened faster than I blinked my eyes.

    Wednesday, 5 October 2011

    the memory of the mitt


    Jayanth Rao                                                        

    Mrs. Meadows

     English G/H

    5th October 2011

     Memory of the Mitt

             I was walking on the streets of New York when I looked around I spotted a local store. There were 15 gloves in the store. I asked the store owner how much a glove was and he said that each glove costs 3 dollars. I looked in my pocket and found only one dollar and fifty cents. I got the money out and asked him if he had any glove for that much.

     ” Just a second”, he replied as he walked out of sight. After a long wait, he finally appeared with a worn out glove.

    He said “It’s a used one”. I had to get it for Jeffry since today is his birthday. He loves base ball and he is my brother. When I came home Jeffry was watching TV.

    I told him, “Jeffry, I have a present for you!”

     He asked, “What is it?”

     “Nothing, just a base ball glove”, I replied.

     He asked, “Where is it?” I gave it to him and said “How is it Jeffry?”



    He replied enthusiastically, “it’s just perfect!”

    I asked “What’s stinking Jeff?”

    He said “mom”. I went in the kitchen, I saw mom making dinner. It looked disgusting and smelled bad. When I went back to the living room, I saw Jeffry writing on the glove.

    I asked him “What are you writing Jeff?”

    He replied, “Oh! Nothing just a poem”. Jeffry was a good poet. I asked him why he was writing it on the glove. He said that if he got bored on the field he could read it. He was getting ready for a base ball game he has tomorrow.

    The next morning I woke up and looked out of the window. Jeffry was practicing with the glove I gave. I went to eat breakfast. We had bacon and eggs. I called Jeffry to come and eat. He said he wasn’t hungry.

    But my mom said “Jeffry, if you don’t eat you can’t play well”. So he came and ate.

    It was 10:00 AM and we were already in the field. We sat on the last row. Jeffry was an outfielder because he was good at catching balls. He didn’t get many balls to catch .So he was reading the poems he wrote on the glove. While he was reading, a ball came in fast and hit his head and he fainted. My and I mom rushed him to the hospital. The doctors ran some tests and informed us that he had leukemia and may not have a long time to live. After five months my brother Jeffry died. The only thing he left behind was the glove and poems on it.